Review of 11 Terrible Months - R L Royle
This is the creepy story of an ordinary family living in a council flat through a severe haunting, for eleven months. I really enjoyed this book but did think it had some problems. First of all, being as it was, an account of the same set of events recorded by three different people, this book was always going to face certain difficulties: by the end of the first account the reader has already come to the end of the story, so why should they read on? if the accounts were to be realistic, certain events are going to be repeated threefold, how could they remain fresh each time?
The author tackles these issues with some success and some failure. Some of the repetition felt repetitive, and some worked really well. I also thought that that the second two accounts should have been considerably shorter than the first, to give the reader an incentive to read on without thinking, 'oh i've got to go through all that again'. Account 3 is the perfect length, short and snappy and filling in the gaps of the other two. Account two however left me struggling. I thought it was far too long, and quite rambling. I do not need to see every idle thought in a characters mind, and a lot of Chris' account suffered from characterization-over-storytelling, and really could have done with some sharper editing (perhaps one of the pitfalls of self-publishing). That said, Chris' character and story were interesting, if overlong.
In spite of it's flaws, Eleven Terrible Months is a compulsive read, and I found myself immersed in a world I kept wanting to return to. After I had finished the book it stayed with me for days. I loved the concept of this book, the ordinariness of the family and the writing was fresh take on the haunted house story. It's a shame that this book failed to deliver its full potential, and a good book could have been even better.
7/10