Hi Steve, no apology necessary, at least you gave it a good go and your review was honest, and you were able to dissect and pinpoint what you did not like. However, you did give an accurate account of Vance's trademark style, which is his astonishing inventiveness, his worldbuilding , his ideas and descriptions. That dialogue style runs through all his books so I guess if that annoyed you, and the other things weren't enough to hook you, then as you say Jack is not for you.
I still enjoyed reading your review though.
We shall talk more of Lyonesse over a few beers in London!