Eliza1 - Mitchell began to lose me with the Midwife in the wierd nunnery plot. There was the exciting escape scene ,only to be followed by the shock that Orito had voluntarily returned to captivity ! I felt that the author was so proud of the escape scene that he had to keep that in the novel despite the story needing Orito to remain in the nunnery.
I did think the chapters concerning the English attack on Dejima resounded well.He was good on the Japanese culture as well.
Good to read you agreed with me on the ending.
And yes he is an amazing writer.