Thank you for the comments. Yes I did write this book and I am trying to write a query letter to an agent at the moment. This was suppose to be my hook so I maybe should have added what the book was about also.
It is an attempt to make unicorns less 'my little pony' and the book doesn't feature them that much. It is mainly about the Araman whose job it is to find the unicorn with a newly appointed knight. However, she is reluctant to do this as she is against the tradition but knows she has little choice because the first knight she is appointed to is the General of a neighboring kingdom that has come to secure an alliance between them. He is invited to participate in the tradition as a gesture of good will, but before he can, he becomes mysteriously ill and the Araman Raliena, after a lifetime of hiding her healing ability that she gained from a unicorn's blood, has to risk exposing her power to those who wish to use it for personal gain, to save the general and complete the alliance.
Raliena also now has to contend with the King's manipulative adviser who wishes to claim her powers by using something called the right of the Sinners.
The unicorns are more of a catalyst in the story but I thought I should mention it in my hook as there is very little market out there for them and as I said, I was trying to make them more interesting. Perhaps I should leave that out of the hook for now?
